Is my novel good so far?

Pretty good. But, you do need to work on it a little bit, try and put more pauses in your story. People will want to read more if you do that. (When I mean pauses, I mean commas). The book sounds REALLY good so far. Just don't EVER get off a different subject for the whole story, or it wont make sense. There are some sentences you messed up on. You'll notice them. I hope this novel will be published when its finished!!! Do well!!!